What if the man's face in the moon wasn't a man
At all but a woman? A friend asked me.
I said it was always a woman to me, the moon
For she charted our lives from inside and outside
In cycles
That’s how we looked at the moon from towns
By swollen rivers
And eastern monsoon winds.
My first pets were rabbits etched on the moon
Seen from my bedroom window
When storytelling was a rite and people sifted truth from lies.
I wasn’t yet called a moon-faced siren then
Until it became a new moon.
If you’re a hunter, fisherman,
Farmer, gardener,
You know what the moon does to you, your
Forests, noisy crickets and dreamy skies
She’s a jealous rival or a benevolent ladylove.
Earlier the fishermen of my coasts cast lines
Measuring phases of the moon;
If they found her moody and sad
Like their wives or doting like a mother
At all but a woman? A friend asked me.
I said it was always a woman to me, the moon
For she charted our lives from inside and outside
In cycles
That’s how we looked at the moon from towns
By swollen rivers
And eastern monsoon winds.
My first pets were rabbits etched on the moon
Seen from my bedroom window
When storytelling was a rite and people sifted truth from lies.
I wasn’t yet called a moon-faced siren then
Until it became a new moon.
If you’re a hunter, fisherman,
Farmer, gardener,
You know what the moon does to you, your
Forests, noisy crickets and dreamy skies
She’s a jealous rival or a benevolent ladylove.
Earlier the fishermen of my coasts cast lines
Measuring phases of the moon;
If they found her moody and sad
Like their wives or doting like a mother
They stopped wars in honor of the woman-moon
Even when she marched on through her waning
Left-handed gibbous.
Even when she marched on through her waning
Left-handed gibbous.
They’ve forgotten that pride.
(First published in The Toronto Quarterly, Jan 09. Order copies on lulu.com. Photograph from my porch -- 2008 full lunar eclipse in progress.)
NOTES: The Moon, as is the Sun, often in Indian lore, is male. "Chandamama" is literally "moon uncle", whereas in some other parts of the subcontinent, the moon is a woman, elderly and loving. A female's progression from girlhood to womanhood is quite commonly compared to the moon's growing phases. As in other parts of the world, the moon in this region is also a source of myth for emotions, upheavals, changes.
5 comments:
"My first pets were rabbits etched on the moon
Seen from my bedroom window"
O wow. Very well written. Enjoyed.
Hey Rhett! That is so true for me! Thank you!!
Nabina I am absolutely in love with this one. I love the various shades of moon and you have written so beautifully. woman moon ..wow ..
Thank you Tiku! Themoon is for us a very mysterious object, a purveyor of huge changes in life and politics too...
Like this poem a lot... I think it is a woman in the moon as well.
Chris Brooks
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