tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5713026153139997437.post4941808377486342387..comments2023-12-24T08:35:20.551-05:00Comments on Do you see?: SURFACES Poetry Reading & Chapbook LaunchUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5713026153139997437.post-19602638565693631232010-11-07T18:53:33.452-05:002010-11-07T18:53:33.452-05:00Woman from both sides is very nicely done in that ...Woman from both sides is very nicely done in that its never clear until the end - when the subject imagined until then is actually dead - <br /><br />after the show is special - but i wish you'd present it better - sort'a difficult to follow with a line gap in d middle of successive lines n d poem being rather long - but hey these poems r tricky to write anyway and you did a great job - and the end - when those songs are played as the backdrop of the next stage preparation - was great and galvanized the whole poem actually. <br /><br />Ahalya’s Wish is also a good poem - simple but well crafted. <br />KushKushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05153330074390558887noreply@blogger.com